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Save me, save me, Oh why can't the world peace be, In my dreams, I see family, Love them .......


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Old 08-06-2008, 06:30 PM   #1 (permalink)
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Save me, save me,

Oh why can't the world peace be,

In my dreams, I see family,

Love them so, or you will pay,

Dying, my friends dying!

In the end, you feel bad,

Everyone is the same now,

Respect them, they will respect you,

Soldiers give their lives, Remember Them!


Copyright 2008, Harry Borgenvik - Aged 11 - My Son!

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Old 08-06-2008, 06:34 PM   #2 (permalink)
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A brilliant poem Harry. Well done

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Old 08-06-2008, 06:40 PM   #3 (permalink)
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Well done Harry, thats great
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Old 08-06-2008, 07:42 PM   #4 (permalink)
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Well done Harry thats brilliant love


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Old 08-06-2008, 08:28 PM   #5 (permalink)
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Fantastic Harry

Written with feeling

Thanks for sharing it with us


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Old 08-06-2008, 09:07 PM   #6 (permalink)
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Brilliant Poem Harry, Well Done
Jon & Kel you must be so proud
P.S Not forgetting Nan & Grandad

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Old 08-06-2008, 11:32 PM   #7 (permalink)
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That's excellent, Harry - well done !

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Old 09-06-2008, 06:18 AM   #8 (permalink)
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What a wonderful poem,

Well done Harry..

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Old 17-06-2008, 01:23 PM   #9 (permalink)
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Jon, just read Harry's poem. It's wonderful and written with feeling.
Well done Harry.

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Old 17-06-2008, 09:08 PM   #10 (permalink)
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hi harry, your poem is fantastic well done. paulettewinter
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